WAITING FOR THE STARS
Sitting here on the side of the road
Listening to the crickets call
Long after nightfall
Waiting for the stars to fall
Time moves slow
The moons yellow glow
when will the heavens start the show
Still waiting for the stars to fall
Waiting here with baited breath
Staring into the sky's immeasurable breadth
Watching for a meteors crashing death
As i sit and wait for the stars to fall
Clouds move in and obscure my sight
And I curse the heavens for my cloudy plight
I guess I'll have to wait for tomorrow night
To see any stars that fall
The score is way off in the first verse and it leaves a foul taste in ones mouth for the remainder of the "poem" the next one down you wrote for a girl is not awfull . You just effectively made me give up my search for a blog to post my poetry to.
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